Walt: creatively write and present a piece of poetry.
Our activity today was to write a poem relating to refuges/refugees. My poem is a rhyming poem. I pictured what it would be like if I was in a city that had been bombed. My favourite part of my poem is that part where it says 'We're going to escape, some places that others give.'
What is your favourite part and why?
Hi Ella, I like your poem, Why did you choose to do a rhyming poem? Did you work on your own? How did you come up with the ideas for the poem? And do you like or are you good at poetry?
ReplyDeleteHi Ella, My favourite part of your poem is when you said ''Broken bits of memories, fallen from the homes.'' I liked that bit because it is well described for a city being bombed.I also really like how it all rhymes.
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB :)
Hi Ella, I really like you poem. My favourite part is "We're going to escape, some places that give". You put effort into this poem. Did you enjoy making it? How long did it take?
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