WALT: Write a poem with two poetic tools.
Reflection: I could found better Level 3 words for this one but I guess this is the first one this term I have done.
The message in the bottle
The cold ocean hit his face.
The cold ocean has a nice pace.
Driving into the ocean to clear his mind.
Driving into the ocean. He got a fright.
Bang! Hit his head on a glass bottle.
He felt confused for he had never seen a bottle in the ocean before.
He opened the bottle to find a letter.
Dear somebody,
My kids and I a trapped please save.
We’re in on an island in a cave.
We are dehydrated like a camel and have no food or water.
We are as hungry as a shark. S.O.S. Save our souls.
We are as hungry as a shark. S.O.S. Save our souls.
Wow Ella, I love the poem you have written and how you made it rhyme. Can you tell me more about level 3 words? What are some examples of level 3 words?
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