Nature Walk.
Packed all the food
Put on my shoes.
I feel like a ball bouncing
Up and down because I am so excited.
Maia my mate is traveling with me
Along with my brother, Louie.
I see colors of green and brown,
Hearing bubbly bird’s bubbling,
And I feel calm and stunned about
How beautiful nature can really be.
We ate food, strawberries dipped
in chocolate. Yum!
Walked to the river, dived in.
Hurt my shin. Ouch!
Off back home to tell my mates.
Off back home, it’s going to be late.
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Reflection: I think I could have used more level three words. I felt like I did really well though.
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Reflection: I think I could have used more level three words. I felt like I did really well though.
verey cool i like your describeing
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Deletei like how uesd louie and maia in it
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